Does Your Website Pass the "I" "We" "You" Test?

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Two-Point Perspective. Write from the readers perspective on your website. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

As the use of websites to promote our brand and generate leads intensifies too many of us fail a basic but critical test which dramatically impact the performance of our sites.

You will know by now that Google wants everyone to focus on content, yes, that’s the boring bit we have to produce which goes on those lovely well designed web pages we've paid for. For most of us writing copy is not something we do as a profession, but there is something simple we can do which will help us connect with your audience even if we aren’t confident about writing copy.

The most influential is the "I" "we" "you" test. What does that mean? This is simply the number of times you use the terms "I", "we", or "you" on a single page of text. The ideal ratio is 1 "I" "we" to every 6 "you". Sadly for most web sites the ratio is the complete opposite. Why is this important? As a visitor to a site I want to you to be writing from my perspective about thing of interest or benefit to me and about things that might or should be important to me. Its a basic marketing principle that you should always write from the prospective of the reader not the writer. The reason for this is simple when we write from our own perspective we get to focused on what is important to us, which in most cases is not what is important to the reader.

For example writing on your web site “we’ve been established for 25 years and we offer the best in class widget, our quality makes us different” Well lovely, but frankly I’m just not that bothered. However, if you wrote “As a user of widgets you've probably found that the biggest problem is inconsistent quality. So you’ll be looking for a supplier who can give you guarantees about the performance of the widgets you need”. Well you know what; I’m interested.

The two short extracts are talking about the same thing but from a completely different perspectives and it’s the latter which employs “you” that speaks from a potential purchasers perspective which engages the reader, and that is the perspective you must have to get the maximum performance from your site.

Now then why don’t you nip over to your website and see how you fair in the "I" "we" "you" test.

Exigent Consulting provides specialist services for High Growth Businesses, Business Turnaround, and Mentoring to the Small and Medium Business. We help business owners improve the profit performance of their business. 

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Why Web 3.0 Marketing Isn’t the Silver Bullet

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You cant get to the top using the wrong tools

Almost every week I see some sort of marketing splurge about how cold calling is dead and how “web 2.0 or even 3.0” is the way to go. The latest and the reason for this article was the headline “Increase Cold Calling Success by 6-8 Hundred Percent” It’s message was by using Web 3.0 (can’t wait for Web 4.0) and social media best practises any salesman can increase their success by 6-8 Hundred Percent. At this point a stream of abuse and derision was about to leave my lips. However, I paused mainly in respect of those of a tender age and a delicate disposition, but realised that the writer had simply missed the point and was looking at the problem the wrong way, that is from the sellers perspective not the buyers.

I have recently been involved in selling a service to CEO, FD’s and Company Secretaries of the top 1000 businesses in the UK. What is abundantly clear is that using Web anything and social media as a way of contacting my suspects, is as likely to succeed in delivering orders as running backwards up Everest is likely to get you to the summit without falling off. The reason, simple, most senior executives of organisations of that size don’t use or need social media and many are surprisingly unskilled in the use of the internet. This is not only a function of their age but also the fact that they have been successful in establishing their own network using traditional face to face techniques. To them online techniques are irrelevant.

So what did work? Well cold calling, once we had made contact we could explain how our service was of benefit. We were able to generate a steady stream of meetings and sales. Why was that? After all according to many pundits call calling is interrupt driven and doesn’t develop the buyer seller relationship.  All of this may be true but for our market it (cold calling) was a communications method they understood and could relate too, consequently it was effective.

My point is that the mix of marketing and sales processes required to be successful changes in every situation. Your marketing mix must reflect the expectations of your targets. Whilst useful, web 3.0 or any other sub-variant of marketing is not a panacea. The hype that social networking changes everything is just plain wrong, it doesn’t replace common sense and it isn’t a Silver Bullet, its just another arrow in the thoughtful marketers armoury. 

Exigent Consulting specialises in providing Business Turnaround, Sales, Marketing and Mentoring to the Small and Medium Business. We help Business Owners improve the profit performance of their business.